I am a Year 5 student in the Uru Mānuka Cluster. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first drafts. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Hi this is Daisy. I really like this, it's really cool and I like the colours. Maybe you could add more text for the reflection and stuff. What is your sisters name?
Kia Ora Ashlyn. You're holiday looks interesting and fun. I went to holiday programme in my holidays it was super fun!. I think next time you could work on your grammar and your punctuation Tino Pai! -Aimee
Hey Ashlyn, It sounded like you had a great holiday with your family. I like how you put the colourful background! Maybe next time put some pictures, add more writing and cheek for spelling mistakes but on the rest was really good, good job!!
Kamusta Ashlyn. I like to hear that your holiday was fun it sound interesting! I like the background it is very beautiful and colorful! Maybe next time you could put some photos of you and your family ( If you could ) and maybe check your spelling because grammar is important! Great job! -Aimee
Hey Ashlyn, its Daisy. This is super cool! I love the font of your work! I went to Willowbank in the holidays. Next time I think you should practice changing mistakes.
Hi this is Daisy.
ReplyDeleteI really like this, it's really cool and I like the colours.
Maybe you could add more text for the reflection and stuff.
What is your sisters name?
Kia Ora Ashlyn.
ReplyDeleteYou're holiday looks interesting and fun.
I went to holiday programme in my holidays it was super fun!.
I think next time you could work on your grammar and your punctuation
Tino Pai! -Aimee
Hey Ashlyn,
ReplyDeleteIt sounded like you had a great holiday with your family.
I like how you put the colourful background!
Maybe next time put some pictures, add more writing and cheek for spelling mistakes but on the rest was really good, good job!!
Kamusta Ashlyn.
ReplyDeleteI like to hear that your holiday was fun it sound interesting!
I like the background it is very beautiful and colorful!
Maybe next time you could put some photos of you and your family ( If you could ) and maybe check your spelling because grammar is important!
Great job! -Aimee
Hey Ashlyn Olivia here.
ReplyDeleteI really like your post it is really
but next time maybe add a little more writing
Hey Ashlyn, its Daisy.
ReplyDeleteThis is super cool! I love the font of your work!
I went to Willowbank in the holidays.
Next time I think you should practice changing mistakes.