I am a Year 5 student in the Uru Mānuka Cluster. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first drafts. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Kia ora Ashlyn. I am really pleased to see that you have started to develop your mihi. It would be great if you worked on it throughout the year and then recorded it again to show your progress and improvement. Ka pai.
Kia ora Ashlyn. This is Raewyn. I love how you screencastify yourself of you reading your Mihi. This reminds me that I've seen this in every other people's blog post of them screencastify themselves of their Mihi. Next time you should put a title of you doing your Mihi and check if you done your spelling right cause I have spotted a mistaken word for Mihi. Blog you later bye!
Hi ashlyn . this is Jason from whakamanawa. I love your screencastify but maybe you could show you face instead of just saying it.Next time you should check you title because you spelt mihi wrong.
Hello Ashlyn. It's brodie from whakamanawa. I like how you posted your mihi on your blog. next time you cloud tell us your next step is. Did your mihi take you long to learn.
Kia ora Ashlyn. This is Wiari in Whakamanawa. I like how you posted your mihi on your blog. next time you cloud tell us your next step is. Did your mihi take you long to learn.
Maybe You should put your face in the bottom so we can see you And could you add full stops on your sentence and your next step that would be good! But other then that its aweseom!
Kia ora Ashlyn.
ReplyDeleteI am really pleased to see that you have started to develop your mihi. It would be great if you worked on it throughout the year and then recorded it again to show your progress and improvement. Ka pai.
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ReplyDeleteKia ora Ashlyn. This is Raewyn.
ReplyDeleteI love how you screencastify yourself of you reading your Mihi.
This reminds me that I've seen this in every other people's blog post of them screencastify themselves of their Mihi.
Next time you should put a title of you doing your Mihi and check if you done your spelling right cause I have spotted a mistaken word for Mihi.
Blog you later bye!
Hi Ashlyn.
ReplyDeleteThis is good but I can hear clearly what you are speaking. Maybe you can share your face and speak clearly or loudly so I can hear.
Hi Ashlyn.
ReplyDeleteI´M robert from whakamanawa. I like to say your stuff because it very nice bye.
Hi ashlyn . this is Jason from whakamanawa.
ReplyDeleteI love your screencastify but maybe you could show you face instead of just saying it.Next time you should check you title because you spelt mihi wrong.
Hello Ashlyn. It's brodie from whakamanawa.
ReplyDeleteI like how you posted your mihi on your blog.
next time you cloud tell us your next step is.
Did your mihi take you long to learn.
Hi Ashlyn
ReplyDeleteit is Simeli from whakamanawa.Great job on the mih.I like how you said the word's rhit
but next time speak a little lowder.
Kia ora Ashlyn. This is Wiari in Whakamanawa.
ReplyDeleteI like how you posted your mihi on your blog.
next time you cloud tell us your next step is.
Did your mihi take you long to learn.
Hola Ashlyn! Christina Here from Whakamanawa!
ReplyDeleteMaybe You should put your face in the bottom so we can see you
And could you add full stops on your sentence and your next step that would be good! But other then that its aweseom!
thnak you everyone. Im so happy rint now
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